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Which drama or movie touched you the most? Why?

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The most touching movie is 'Taps(1981)' in my life. I saw it in 1994 when I was 14 years old with my older sister. Actually we saw it four times constantly for 2 days and we cried four times. It is about military cadets. There was a gun malfunction accident in the military academy's party. So the goverment tried to close it. Time goes by, the cadets experienced conflicts with the goverment. They even start to battle with the goverment army. Many cadets dead while the battle. It was so sad and I repected their sence of duty and pride. I also dreamed to be a soilder at that time, that's why I was hooked on that movie. Moreover, the actor is Tom Cruise!!!!

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Hi Arissa! 

Thank you for sending your answer to me.
Wow! First of all, Tom Cruise really looked so handsome in the photo you shared. This is my first time knowing about this movie. With the summary alone, I felt like I will really cry a lot while watching it. 

~ Teacher Gina

The most touching movie is 'Taps(1981)' in my life. I saw it in 1994 when I was 14 years old with my older sister. Actually we saw it four times constantly for 2 days and we cried four times. It is about military cadets. There was a gun malfunction accident in the military academy's party. So the goverment tried to close it. Time goes by, the cadets experienced conflicts with the goverment. They even start to battle with the goverment army. Many cadets dead while the battle. It was so sad and I repected their sence of duty and pride. I also dreamed to be a soilder at that time, that's why I was hooked on that movie. Moreover, the actor is Tom Cruise!!!!


>> The most touching movie in my life is 'Taps(1981)'. I saw it in 1994 when I was 14 years old with my older sister. Actually, we saw it four times constantly for two days, and we cried four times. It is about military cadets. There was a gun malfunction accident at the military academy's party. So the government tried to close it. Time went by, and the cadets experienced conflicts with the government. They even started to battle with the government army. Many cadets died during the battle. It was so sad, and I respected their sense of duty and pride. I also dreamed of being a soldier at that time. That's why I was hooked on that movie. Moreover, the actor is Tom Cruise!!!!
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