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My favorite Korean tradition is spicy food. Korean food is known for hot taste, so there are many restaurants are selling different kinds of tteokbokki. I like to eat them whenever I have a craving for a spicy food.

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Good evening, Judy!

Eating Korean food is a daily part of your life and you are fortunate because quality food ingredients abound your country, thus, making these foods or buying them a piece of cake. It is a very important part of your tradition because these recipes had been handed down to your parents from your great grandparents or your ancestors.

Thank you so much for your homework answer. My suggestions are easy to follow. Read them carefully and see you in class again tomorrow. 

Take care.

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My favorite Korean tradition is spicy food. 
>> My favorite Korean traditional is the spicy food. 

Korean food is known for hot taste, so there are many restaurants are selling different kinds of tteokbokki. 
>> Korean food is known for its hot taste, so there are many restaurants selling different kinds of tteokbokki. 

I like to eat them whenever I have a craving for a spicy food.
>> Correct!
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