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What are the things you need when you go on a trip?

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2022-07-03 955

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When I go on a trip I must have bring my cell phone.
It is very basic and necessary thing everyone.
I can check my hotel and tour reservation. And I have to contact with my guide. When I was go to Malaysia.in first day. My phone was exploded while I'm charging. Because the power didn't match. I think the converter was defective. So from the next day. I used my friend phone. I'm glad I wasn't along. We used just one phone during trip. I knew it before, but I realized that cell phone is very essential and indispensable.

Cell phone can be a camera. Nowadays, iPhone and Galaxy have professional camera models.it was not need to another camera.

And it can be wallet. I can pay for my cell phone. Like PAYCO or internet banking services. I think I can travel anywhere with just one cell phone

Oh!. and we need to power band for charged we'recell phone.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello Eun Chae!
There are many things you can bring when traveling.  Remember to list what you need to bring so you won't forget any of them. :)


~T. Maine


When I go on a trip I must have bring my cell phone.
>>When I go on a trip, I must bring my cellphone. 
It is very basic and necessary thing everyone.
>>It is a very basic and necessary thing for everyone. 
I can check my hotel and tour reservation. 
>>Correct. 
And I have to contact with my guide. 
>>And I also need to contact my tour guide. 
When I was go to Malaysia.in first day. My phone was exploded while I'm charging.
>>When I went to Malaysia on my first day, my phone exploded while I was charging. 
Because the power didn't match. I think the converter was defective. 
>> It was because the power outlet didn't match my phone's voltage and I think the converter was defective. 
So from the next day. I used my friend phone. 
>>So the next day, I used my friend's phone. 
I'm glad I wasn't along. 
>>I'm glad it wasn't that long. 
We used just one phone during trip. 
>> We used one phone for the whole trip. 
I knew it before, but I realized that cell phone is very essential and indispensable.
>>I knew it before, but I realized that the cellphone was very essential and indispensable
Cell phone can be a camera. 
>>Cellphones can be used as a camera. 
Nowadays, iPhone and Galaxy have professional camera models.
>>Correct. 
it was not need to another camera.
>>It was no need to bring another camera. 
And it can be wallet. 
>>It could also be your wallet. 
I can pay for my cell phone. Like PAYCO or internet banking services. 
>> I can pay anything using my cellphone just like PAYCO or internet banking services. 
I think I can travel anywhere with just one cell phone
>>I think I can travel anywhere with just one cellphone. 
Oh!. and we need to power band for charged we'recell phone.
>>Oh! In addition, we also need a power bank in case we need to charge our phone while traveling. 

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