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What are your daily habits?

작성자: 전*채
2022-07-05 863

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My daily habit is related to smell. In the morning I turn on the candle warmer to smell it. Actually I sensitive to smell. I want to start with a good smell in the morning. And I put on perfurm
when I go to outside. Nowadays I put on cool smells perfume.
It gives me a pleasant day. I also put on perfum before I sleep. I put on the soft and aromatic smells.it makes me relax.

Another daily habit is write a English sentence. Like this homework or diary. Sometimes I want to pass just one day. But, if I didn't I got a sense of guilty. In weekend, I write a short English news ore stories. So I make my English note. I write something what I learn every day. The notes is my perfectly studying textbook. I want know what written in the note.
If I look what I wrote everyday I feel proud and I want to full a empty section. So it can be continue the habit.
I wish I want to continue this habit for a long time.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello Eun Chae!
It's nice to practice speaking and writing at the same time.  Reading your corrections and memorizing the correct ones would also help you improve your skills.  ^^

~T. Maine


My daily habit is related to smell. 
>>Correct. 
In the morning I turn on the candle warmer to smell it. 
>>In the morning, I turn on the candle warmer to smell it. 
Actually I sensitive to smell. 
>>Actually, I am sensitive to scents.
>>OR: I have a sensitive smell. 
I want to start with a good smell in the morning. 
>>I want to start my day with something that smells good. 
And I put on perfurm
when I go to outside. 
>>So I put on some perfume when I go outside. 
Nowadays I put on cool smells perfume.
>>Nowadays, I spray some cool scents perfume. 
It gives me a pleasant day. 
>>Correct. 
I also put on perfum before I sleep. 
>>I also use some fragrance before I go to bed. 
I put on the soft and aromatic smells.
>> I put on soft and aromatic scents. 
it makes me relax.
>>It makes me relax. 
Another daily habit is write a English sentence. 
Like this homework or diary.  
>>Another daily habit is writing English sentences like this homework or diary.
Sometimes I want to pass just one day. 
>>Correct. 
But, if I didn't I got a sense of guilty. In weekend, I write a short English news ore stories. 
>>But if I don't get a sense of guilt, on the weekend, I write short English news or stories. 

So I make my English note. 
>>So I make English notes. 
I write something what I learn every day. 
>>I write something that I want to learn every day. 
The notes is my perfectly studying textbook. 
>>The notes are perfect for my studies. 
I want know what written in the note.
>>I want to know what I have written in my notes.
If I look what I wrote everyday I feel proud and I want to full a empty section. 
>>If I look at what I wrote every day, I feel proud and I want to fill the empty section of the page. 
So it can be continue the habit.
>>So it can be continued as a good habit. 
I wish I want to continue this habit for a long time.
>> I wish to continue this habit for a long time. 

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