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Homework highlights obligation by instructors rather than autonomy. It can affect academic habit of students. For example, students can not find and supplement their insufficiency because of too many homework.

Second, homework can decrease the interest of students. Many Korean students have stress from homeworks. It has no choice but to decrease the passion and interest.

I think that homework is necessary. However proper amount of homework is important.

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Happy Friday Helena!
You did great on this homework! I agree that having homework is important but it should not prevent students from having free time.
-T. Caitlyn
Homework highlights obligation by instructors rather than autonomy. 
>> CORRECT
It can affect academic habit of students. 
>> It can affect the academic habit of students. 
For example, students can not find and supplement their insufficiency because of too many homework.
>> For example, students can not find and supplement their insufficiency because of too much homework.
Second, homework can decrease the interest of students. 
>> CORRECT
Many Korean students have stress from homeworks. 
>> Many Korean students are stressed because of homework. 
It has no choice but to decrease the passion and interest.
>> It decreases the passion and interest of students.
I think that homework is necessary. 
>>CORRECT
However proper amount of homework is important.
>> However, the right amount of homework is important.
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