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The youth of today are no different from the youth of the past. Both past and present youth have dreams and shine. Today's average youth members are quiet and active people.

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Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)

~ Teacher Tricia


The youth of today are no different from the youth of the past. 
>>> The youth of today's generation is no different from the youth of the past.

Both past and present youth have dreams and shine. 
>>> CORRECT!

Today's average youth members are quiet and active people.
>>> Today's generation of average youth is quiet and active people.
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