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What will you do this weekend? Do you have any specific plans?

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I have plans on this weekend. I will go to my friend's new home. She moved home last month. She isn't living in Seoul. She live in Taeback. It's near by my hometown. She lives three hour away from me. It's very far. I will go to that on Friday night after work. So I can't take English class just one day.
And I will also go to my home for a bit. I will take a sleep on Friday and I will go to my friend home next day.
It is very busy schedules.it might be tired.
I think about friend's house warming gift.
I will give special soft tower or a large doll that can be pillow.
I'm looking forward on weekend.

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Hello Eun Chae!
I can see that you have a plan on the weekends so I might see you next week.  Enjoy your visit.  ^^

~T. Maine


I have plans on this weekend. 
>> I have plans this weekend. 
I will go to my friend's new home. 
>> Correct. 
She moved home last month. 
>> She moved to here new home last month.
She isn't living in Seoul. 
>> Correct.
She live in Taeback. It's near by my hometown. 
>> She lives in Taeback.  It's nearby my hometown. 
She lives three hour away from me.
>> She lives three hours away from me.
 It's very far. 
>> Correct.
I will go to that on Friday night after work. 
>> I will go to that place on Friday night after work. 
So I can't take English class just one day.
>> So I can't study English for just one day. 
And I will also go to my home for a bit. 
>>  Correct.
I will take a sleep on Friday and I will go to my friend home next day.
>> I will sleep there on Friday then I will go to my friend's house the next day. 
It is very busy schedules.it might be tired.
>>It is a very busy schedule so I might be tired. 
I think about friend's house warming gift.
>>I think about my friend's housewarming gift. 
I will give special soft tower or a large doll that can be pillow.
>>I will give her a special soft towel or a large doll that can be a pillow. 
I'm looking forward on weekend.
>>I'm looking forward to meeting her on weekend. 

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