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Where have you gone for your honymoon?
I have gone to Maldives for my honymoon.
It was a long ~~~~~ jouney.
Maldives is so far far from Korea.
At that time, we had to stop by In Singapore and transfer another airplane goint to Maldives.
We stayed for one night in Singapore and took the airplane again to Maldives 15 years ago.
If I have another chance to go to Maldives.
I may hesitate to decide altough there are nonstop flights to Maldives now (which takes 14 hours now Isn't it far? ) hihihihi
With may age. I prefer comfort and easygoing holidays to adventural and active holidays.

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Hi again Ms. Eunice! It's so sad to say but we didn't really have time for our honeymoon. First, the company only gave me a day off, ONLY FOR MY WEDDING DAY. Hahaha! Since I got married on a Friday, they said I have the weekend to spend with my husband. And so I got back to work on Monday. ;( We were actually planning to visit Singapore, however, unfortunately, he also has to go back to the military base after a week. Anyway, was Maldives  your choice? 
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
Where have you gone for your honeymoon?
>>> CORRECT
I have gone to Maldives for my honeymoon.
>>> CORRECT
It was a long ~~~~~ journey. 
>>> CORRECT
Maldives is so far far from Korea.
>>> CORRECT
At that time, we had to stop by In Singapore and transfer another airplane goint to Maldives.
>>> At that time, we had to stop by in Singapore and transfer to another airplane going to Maldives.
We stayed for one night in Singapore and took the airplane again to Maldives 15 years ago.
>>> CORRECT
If I have another chance to go to Maldives.
>>> CORRECT
I may hesitate to decide although there are nonstop flights to Maldives now (which takes 14 hours now Isn't it far? ) hihihihi
>>> CORRECT
With may age. I prefer comfort and easygoing holidays to adventural and active holidays.
>>> With may age, I prefer comfort and easygoing holidays to adventurous and active holidays.
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