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What was your best trip?

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My best trip is Tokyo. When I was a senior in University. I absented my last class and I went to the Japan alone.
It was a start day in summer vacation. So I wanted to leave right away. I worked part time job in a cafe to get travel money. And that's my first trip on myself and alone.
First day, it was little bit scared but I adjusted in Japan.
Actually, Japan is similar to Korea. They know Korean so it was convenient to stay there.
What I was looking forward to the most is the aquarium.
I like sea creature. My favorite animal is jellyfish. I saw many kinds of jellyfish. And I bought a jellyfish doll at the gift shop.
And then, I arounded streets and playground, I saw the comic books in the bookstore. I went to the beef restaurant. And ate sushi.Iit was unforgettable trip for me. I get a confidence to go another country. Japan is close that can be go any time. That is the most benefit. I will go one more this year.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello Eun Chae!
Nice one! You have been writing long answers with explanations.  Learn from your mistakes and keep on going.  Read the corrections always and enjoy studying! ^^


~T. Maine

My best trip is Tokyo. When I was a senior in University. 
>>My best trip is in Tokyo when I was a senior university student. 
I absented my last class and I went to the Japan alone.
>> I was absent from my class and went to Japan alone. 
It was a start day in summer vacation. 
>>It was the first day of summer vacation. 
So I wanted to leave right away. 
>> Correct.
I worked part time job in a cafe to get travel money. 
>> I worked part-time in a cafe to get  some travel money. 
And that's my first trip on myself and alone.
>>And that's my first trip with myself alone. 
First day, it was little bit scared but I adjusted in Japan.
>>On the first day, it was a little bit scary but I adjusted myself in Japan. 
Actually, Japan is similar to Korea. 
>>Correct. 
They know Korean so it was convenient to stay there.
>> You know that Korea is convenient to stay in. 
What I was looking forward to the most is the aquarium.
>>Correct. 
I like sea creature. 
>>I like sea creatures. 
My favorite animal is jellyfish.
>>My favorite animal is the jellyfish. 
 I saw many kinds of jellyfish. 
>>Correct. 
And I bought a jellyfish doll at the gift shop.
>>Correct. 
And then, I arounded streets and playground, I saw the comic books in the bookstore. 
>>And then, I went around the streets and the playground.  I saw some comic books in the bookstore. 
I went to the beef restaurant. 
>> Correct. 
>> OR: I went to a beef restaurant. 
And ate sushi.Iit was unforgettable trip for me. 
>>And I ate sushi.  It was an unforgettable trip for me. 
I get a confidence to go another country. 
>> I got confidence going to another country. 
Japan is close that can be go any time. 
>>Japan is close to our country so I can go there anytime.
That is the most benefit. 
>>That is the benefit of it. 
I will go one more this year.
>>I will go there one more time this year. 

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