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Why do you think people send their elders to nursing homes?

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I think that it is related with financial problem in each household. It is really difficult to live if one person works in the family due to the prices in my country. It is well known that Korea is one of the countries whose price is the highest in the world and we are seriously interested in child education which needs to pay a lot of money. So if there are old family members and they are sick, their dhildren might consider to send them to nursing home because it is almost impossible to look after sick people with maintaining their jobs. In addition, we believe that care service at the hospital is much better than the service from their family member. Only thing they are worried about is expenses because the service charge is quite expensive and there is no support from the governmnet. It is really sad but our socity already become aging country so it can be most serious problem we have to solve. I hope that government provides right solution for it.

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Good day, Sir Hwang!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

I think that it is related with financial problem in each household. 
>> CORRECT!
It is really difficult to live if one person works in the family due to the prices in my country. 
>> CORRECT!
It is well known that Korea is one of the countries whose price is the highest in the world and we are seriously interested in child education which needs to pay a lot of money. 
>> It is well known that Korea is one of the countries in which the price is the highest in the world, and we are seriously interested in child education which needs to pay a lot of money. 
So if there are old family members and they are sick, their dhildren might consider to send them to nursing home because it is almost impossible to look after sick people with maintaining their jobs. 
>> So if there are old family members and they are sick, their children might consider to send them to nursing homes because it is almost impossible to look after sick people while maintaining their jobs. 
In addition, we believe that care service at the hospital is much better than the service from their family member. 
>> CORRECT!
Only thing they are worried about is expenses because the service charge is quite expensive and there is no support from the governmnet. 
>> CORRECT!
It is really sad but our socity already become aging country so it can be most serious problem we have to solve. 
>> It is really sad but our society already had become an aging country so it can be the most serious problem we have to solve.
I hope that government provides right solution for it.
>> CORRECT!

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