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영작교정 게시판

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자신 있게 쓸 수 있는 영작문을 위해 파워잉글리쉬 수업을 수강하시는
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또는 강사님이 내주시는 과제를 회원님께서 영어로 작성해주시면,
담당 강사 님께서 ‘문법 오류 교정’ 과 ‘더 나은 영어식 표현’으로 교정해주는
서비스 입니다.

please check my sentence.

작성자: 박*우
2022-07-21 1144

회원님의 영작문

Q1. What is the best thing you felt after joining Bybit and what needs to be improved?

After joining Bybit, I was able to adapt quickly with the help of friendly team members. I have good teamwork with the team members who helped me adapt. It can be said that our team's strength is good teamwork. I will think about the need for improvement. There is a lot of confusion in working because there are a lot of personnel adjustments in Bybit. I hope this point will be improved

Q2. Are you satisfied with your current team work and your task? Are you willing to continue to develop?

Yes, I am very satisfied. I am so happy that my ability can contribute to the company after joining the company. I also love that there are team members and systems that I can learn. I will try to contribute to the team and the company by actively utilizing the system in Bybit.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hey there, Seong Woo!

Thanks for writing today. I hope this will help you. Have a nice day! 

- Kristine ^^

Q1. What is the best thing you felt after joining Bybit and what needs to be improved?
>> Correct
After joining Bybit, I was able to adapt quickly with the help of friendly team members.

>> After joining Bybit, I was able to adapt quickly with the help of my friendly team members.

I have good teamwork with the team members who helped me adapt.

>> I work well with my team members who helped me in adapting.

It can be said that our team's strength is good teamwork.

>> Good teamwork is our team's greatest strength.

I will think about the need for improvement.

>> I will think about other things that require improvement.

There is a lot of confusion in working because there are a lot of personnel adjustments in Bybit.

>> There is a lot of confusion at work because of many personnel adjustments in Bybit.

I hope this point will be improved
>> I hope this point will be improved.
Q2. Are you satisfied with your current team work and your task? Are you willing to continue to develop?
>> Are you satisfied with your current teamwork and your task? Are you willing to continue to develop?
Yes, I am very satisfied.

>> Correct

I am so happy that my ability can contribute to the company after joining the company.

>> I am so happy that, after joining the company, I can use my skills to help the organization.

I also love that there are team members and systems that I can learn.

>> I also appreciate that I can learn from my team members and the systems.

I will try to contribute to the team and the company by actively utilizing the system in Bybit.

>> I will try to contribute to the team and to the company, by actively utilizing the system in Bybit.


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