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the pros and cons of both husband and wife working

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Thesedays, There are mant people that both husband and wife work in Korea. Maybe It could correspond to most of them. we can't survive with the society with only one person among couples who get to work. We get the house but most money that is spent for buying the house is coming from the loan. We can't buy the house and car only with our own money. because of this kind of problems, they hesitate to have a baby. because they won't be able to play with their children,and care everything during working days. I think we have to amend our policies or the goverments try to do the best to reduce the price.

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Good evening Hui Woon. 
T. Irene   
These days, There are mant people that both husband and wife work in Korea. 
>>> These days, many married couples in Korea have to both work to be able to support their family. 
Maybe It could correspond to most of them. 
>>> Maybe it applies to most couples. 
we can't survive with the society with only one person among couples who get to work. 
>>> Families can't survive the Korean lifestyle if only one of the couples is working. 
We get the house but most money that is spent for buying the house is coming from the loan. 
>>> We need to buy a house but most of the time we needed to get a loan from a bank. 
We can't buy the house and car only with our own money. because of this kind of problems, they hesitate to have a baby. because they won't be able to play with their children,and care everything during working days. 
>>> We can't afford to buy a house and car with only our own salary. It is because of this kind of problem that couples hesitate on having a baby. because they won't be able to play with their children,and care everything during working days. 
>>> They won't be able to play and care for their kids when they are at work. 
I think we have to amend our policies or the goverments try to do the best to reduce the price.
>>>  I think we have to amend our policies or the government should try to do its best to reduce the expenses.
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