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I agree on the extent about this. To do save the earth, we need to set our mind from each person. But, It's getting harder as time goes by. Because we have made so much plastics and other various pollutions. In addition, after the covid,we use more plastic in korea. To prevent the spread of Corona, people ordered a lot of delivery food, and the delivery food was always put in plastic containers and gave it to us. I always feel guilty when I see plastic containers that occur every time I eat delivery food. So I try not to eat delivery food as much as possible. Also, I try not to use cup holders and straws as much as possible when I go to cafes. We will have to practice small and trivial things first to protect nature.

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Good evening Hui Won. I appreciate your thoughts and ideas about these topics.  Thank you for sharing them with me. ^_^
T. Irene  
I agree on the extent about this. 
>>> I agree to this issue to some extent.
To do save the earth, we need to set our mind from each person. 
>>>  To save the earth, we need to focus on each person. 
But, It's getting harder as time goes by. 
>>> Correct. 
Because we have made so much plastics and other various pollutions. 
>>> We have made so many plastics and other various pollutants. 
In addition, after the covid,we use more plastic in korea. 
>>> In addition, after the COVID-19 pandemic, we used more plastics in Korea.  
To prevent the spread of Corona, people ordered a lot of delivery food, and the delivery food was always put in plastic containers and gave it to us. 
>>> To prevent the spread of Corona, people ordered a lot of delivery food, and these are placed in plastic containers before being given to us. 
I always feel guilty when I see plastic containers that occur every time I eat delivery food. 
>>> I always feel guilty when I see plastic containers every time I eat delivery food. 
So I try not to eat delivery food as much as possible. 
>>> Correct.  
Also, I try not to use cup holders and straws as much as possible when I go to cafes. 
>>> Correct. 
We will have to practice small and trivial things first to protect nature.
>>> Correct. 







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