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Apart from humans, which animal would you say is the most intelligent?

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I think chimpanzees are the most intelligent because they know how to use a tool like people. Also, there are many videos which prove thier intelligence. For example, a video about chimpanzee washing clothes and using smart phone. Because of this, some chimpanzees go into space. And I heard that their IQ is as high as three-year-old people. I want to see chimpanzees which are intelligent in person!

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Happy Monday, Kimberly! 

Thank you for submitting your homework! What a superb answer! You clearly explained your point well and cited examples. I appreciate how informative this is, and I totally agree with you-- chimpanzees are considered to be one of the smartest animals in the world. Just like what you shared, they know how to figure out how things work.

Keep it up, Kimberly! See you in class.

~ Teacher Gela

I think chimpanzees are the most intelligent because they know how to use a tool like people. 
>> CORRECT
Also, there are many videos which prove thier intelligence. 
>> Also, there are many videos that prove their intelligence.
For example, a video about chimpanzee washing clothes and using smart phone. 
>> For example, a video of a chimpanzee washing clothes and using a smartphone.
Because of this, some chimpanzees go into space. 
>> CORRECT
And I heard that their IQ is as high as three-year-old people. 
>> Because of this, some chimpanzees go into space, and I heard that their IQ is as high as three-year-old toddlers. 
I want to see chimpanzees which are intelligent in person!
>> I want to see chimpanzees that are intelligent in person!
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