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Why do you think respecting others\' opinions is important in this world?

작성자: 김*연
2022-08-01 727

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These days people tend to be individualism. So comunicative ability is very important between people. Respecting other's opinions is the key of comunication. If we insist our own thought continuosly, we may have conflict with others. And respecttation is necessary to each other. One-sided respectation is also dangerous. If we want to have strong faith with others, we have to respect others first. These atitude will help to solve many kinds of conflict that may happen between people. I also want to try listen to other's opinions with respectation and hope to help making good relationship in this world.

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Hi Arissa, 

Thank you for your sharing your thoughts regarding this question. 
I totally agree with you especially when you mentioned that one-sided respect is dangerous since it seems like we only demand but not give it to others. A give and take is very important to keep the balance and good relationship. I hope that more people will realize the real value of respect in building human relationships.

~ Teacher Gina

These days people tend to be individualism. So comunicative ability is very important between people. Respecting other's opinions is the key of comunication. If we insist our own thought continuosly, we may have conflict with others. And respecttation is necessary to each other. One-sided respectation is also dangerous. If we want to have strong faith with others, we have to respect others first. These atitude will help to solve many kinds of conflict that may happen between people. I also want to try listen to other's opinions with respectation and hope to help making good relationship in this world.

>> 
These days people tend to be individualistic. So communicative ability is very important between people. Respecting others' opinions is the key to communication. If we insist on our thoughts continuously, we may conflict with others. And respect is necessary for each other. One-sided respect is also dangerous. If we want to have strong faith in others, we must respect others first. This attitude will help solve many kinds of conflicts that may happen between people. I also want to listen to other's opinions with respect and hope to help make good relationships in this world.
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