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Do you have a hard time to take care of the boy?
I hope you have a good time with him eventhough he is too young to understand what you want to do.
These days, I am very worried about my face skin.
As I am getting older, my face skin lose elesticity and I find many wrinkles under my eyes.
whenever I watche my face , I feel so sad.
I know that I have to admit the getting old as time goes by.
What do Philipino women do for their skin?
Do they have traditional ways to keep healthy face skin?
Give me tips for me. hihihihi

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Hi there Ms. Eunice! ^^ Actually, I'm just enjoying my time with this little boy. My husband said I have to prepare myself, I mean I'm on a training ground to having a baby in the future. Hahaha! Well, taking good care of our face skin is also one big problem among Filipinas. Many of us try a lot of cosmetics until we're satisfied with the result. Tiktok cosmetic advertisements these days are becoming popular. Some would say we could get whiter in just one wash. That sounds magical however, I'm not the kind of a person who is persuaded by advertisements because to me they are just fantasy. Hahaha! Anyway, you know that we have darker skin compared to Korean women, so many Filipinas would want to be white. I'm worried about getting wrinkles too! It's inevitable though. :(
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
Do you have a hard time to take care of the boy?
>>> Are you having a hard time taking care of the boy?
I hope you have a good time with him even though he is too young to understand what you want him to do.
>>> CORRECT
These days, I am very worried about my face skin.
>>> CORRECT
As I am getting older, my face skin lose elasticity and I find many wrinkles under my eyes.
>>> CORRECT
whenever I watche my face , I feel so sad.
>>> Whenever I look at my face, I feel sad.
I know that I have to admit getting older as time goes by.
>>> CORRECT
What do Filipino women do for their skin?
>>> CORRECT
Do they have traditional ways to keep healthy face skin?
>>> CORRECT
Give tips for me. hihihihi
>>> CORRECT
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