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If you will build a simple cafe in your area, what will you do to make it a lot more special compare

작성자: 김*연
2022-08-05 1813

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I really hope to have my own cafe someday. So I try to look clearly cafes everywhere when I visit. So I have a model of a special cafe. First of all, there have to be three spaces for visitors. One is for the talking place and the other is for studying or working and people can use their own tablet pc etc. The last is for lecture or activities. In the talking place, I will perpare several kinds of chairs and sofas and ondol(the Korean style) also. So I will make people can feel comfortable and relexing. In the studying or working place, I will prepare personal tables and lightings. However those are only personal study or work not for group. I don't want to make the place became noisy because of the group study or work. I the lecture or activities, I will set meaningful lectures in various fields and intersting activities twice a week. So I will make people think like this, "I want to stay all day in the Arissa's cafe!" ^^

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello Arissa,

Thank you for sharing your ideal cafe. Upon reading, it really is very special even compared to the cafes I have been to. 
I hope one day, you will get the chance to build this kind of cafe. As someone who enjoys relaxation and learning, I think it's going to be the best one. ^^ 

~ Teacher Gina

I really hope to have my own cafe someday. So I try to look clearly cafes everywhere when I visit. So I have a model of a special cafe. First of all, there have to be three spaces for visitors. One is for the talking place and the other is for studying or working and people can use their own tablet pc etc. The last is for lecture or activities. In the talking place, I will perpare several kinds of chairs and sofas and ondol(the Korean style) also. So I will make people can feel comfortable and relexing. In the studying or working place, I will prepare personal tables and lightings. However those are only personal study or work not for group. I don't want to make the place became noisy because of the group study or work. I the lecture or activities, I will set meaningful lectures in various fields and intersting activities twice a week. So I will make people think like this, "I want to stay all day in the Arissa's cafe!" ^^

>> I really hope to have my own cafe someday. So I try to look at cafes clearly everywhere when I visit. So I have a model of a special cafe. First of all, there have to be three spaces for visitors. One is for the talking place and the other is for studying or working and people can use their own tablet pc etc. The last is for lectures or activities. In the talking place, I will prepare several kinds of chairs and sofas and ondol (Korean style) also. So I will make people feel comfortable and relaxed. In the studying or working place, I will prepare personal tables and lighting. However, those are only for personal study or work not for a group. I don't want to make the place noisy because of the group study or work. In the lecture or activities, I will set meaningful lectures in various fields and interesting activities twice a week. So I will make people think like this, "I want to stay all day in Arissa's cafe!" ^^
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