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I could have learned more vocabularies to speak without a hesitation and search the information about Fiji island before I go there. Then, I might have a good life of studying abroad.

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Hi there, Judy!

I think that your not-so-pleasant experience in Fiji Island made you a stronger and better student today. Of course it might be considered as one of the wasted time and opportunities to leanr abroad. Nonetheless, today, the good news is you can study harder and be an even better English speaker. Thus, great job in sharing this to this homework answer.

Take care of your mother and yourself. See you again next time!

-T. Donna~ 

I could have learned more vocabularies to speak without a hesitation and search the information about Fiji island before I go there. 
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