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Are you happy with a two-day weekend or should it be three days?

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oh that's weird question isn't it? everyone think three days weekends will be more happy. i mean everyone like weekends than weekdays right? oh it will be so cool if we get 3days for rest in one week. and i think the best reason why i back up 3days weekends is we can go travel!. in fact if we go travel with family or friend in saturday we can't spend two night and we have to prepare to go work. but when we have 3days weekend. we can prepare one more day after travel. its so cool isn't it

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Hello Robin!
Try to apply the patterns in grammar such as the use of s-form of verbs in subject-verb agreement and the use of comparative adjectives as well.  ^^

~T. Maine


oh that's weird question isn't it? 
>> Oh, that's a weird question, isn't it?
everyone think three days weekends will be more happy. 
>>Everyone thinks a three-day weekend will be happier. 
i mean everyone like weekends than weekdays right? 
>>I mean everyone likes weekends more than weekdays, right?
oh it will be so cool if we get 3days for rest in one week. 
>> Oh, it will be so cool if we get three days to take some rest in one week. 
and i think the best reason why i back up 3days weekends is we can go travel!. 
>> And I think the best reason is we can go traveling in three days. 
in fact if we go travel with family or friend in saturday we can't spend two night and we have to prepare to go work. 
>> In fact, if we go traveling with our families or friends on Saturday, we can't spend two nights and we have to prepare to go to work. 
but when we have 3days weekend.  we can prepare one more day after travel. 
>> But when we have 3 days, we can prepare one more day after traveling. 
its so cool isn't it
>> It's so cool, isn't it?
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