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This is a Beak Rok Dam in Jeju island. The picture that I saw when I visited a Jeju island with my family. Fortunately, the weather was good at that time so that we were able to see it. Can you feel the great of natural?

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his is a Beak Rok Dam in Jeju island.
>> This is Beak Rok Dam in Jeju island.
The picture that I saw when I visited a Jeju island with my family.
>> The view in this picture is the same view I saw when I visited Jeju island with my family.
Fortunately, the weather was good at that time so that we were able to see it.
>> Correct.
Can you feel the great of natural?
>> Can you feel the greatness of nature?
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