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Do you prefer relaxing weekends doing nothing or active ones? / How do they give you joy and comfort

작성자: 박*태
2022-08-10 1438

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Hi teacher QUENNY ^-^
The second time we meet on the phone in order to upgrade my english skill was very impressive to me.
Anyway, teacher QUENNY, as far as I ask for the word named "spontaneous" I might think that you don`t hear that because my pronunciation is bad. ^^. what does mean "spontaneous" exactly . I was looking dictionary and read meaning but I don`t know what it mean exactly.
By the way back to the main issue, I prefer relaxing weekends while doing active ones. As I mentioned before, I have two lovely kids.
They are twins, one is boy, the other is girl.
Therefore, I will choose either saturday or sunday and we have a good time for enjoying at the outside of park or amusement, somewhere
where we belong together.
And second question is exactly what I tell you Answer is "everything" When my twin kids smile at me, I always feel relaxing and comfotable. Ok. today`s homework is done
Good night teacher QUENNY. ^-^

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용


Hi Justin,
I apologized that I wasn't able to answer your question during the class. The word 'SPONTANEOUS' implies a lack of prompting and connotes naturalness. And when you describe an action or event as spontaneous, it means it happened naturally, without having been planned.
You can also learn more by listing down the unfamiliar words you find when reading English materials and checking them out in the dictionary. The best way to remember the meaning of words is by using them in sentences too. This is also one good way to improve your vocabulary skills. Keep improving your English skills with me. Thank you for your compliment. ~ Teacher QUENNY..

 

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Hi teacher QUENNY ^-^
>> Hi teacher QUENNY ^-^(CORRECT) 
The second time we meet on the phone in order to upgrade my English skill was very impressive to me.
>> The second time we meet on the phone in order to upgrade myEenglish skill was very impressive to me.(CORRECT) 
Anyway, teacher QUENNY, as far as I ask for the word named "spontaneous" I might think that you don`t hear that because my pronunciation is bad. ^^. what does mean "spontaneous" exactly .
>> Anyway, teacher QUENNY, as far as I ask for the word named "spontaneous" I might think that you don`t hear that because my pronunciation is bad. ^^. What does mean "spontaneous" exactly? 
 I was looking dictionary and read meaning but I don`t know what it mean exactly.
>>  I was looking for the meaning of the word in the dictionary and read the meaning but I don`t know what it means exactly.
By the way back to the main issue, I prefer relaxing weekends while doing active ones. As I mentioned before, I have two lovely kids.
>> By the way back to the main issue, I prefer relaxing weekends while doing active ones. As I mentioned before, I have two lovely kids. (CORRECT)
They are twins, one is boy, the other is girl.
>> They are twins, one is a boy, the other is a girl.
Therefore, I will choose either saturday or sunday and we have a good time for enjoying at the outside of park or amusement, somewhere where we belong together.
>> Therefore, I will choose either Saturday or Sunday and we have a good time to enjoy outside at the park or amusement park, somewhere where we belong together.
And second question is exactly what I tell you Answer is "everything" When my twin kids smile at me, I always feel relaxing and comfotable. Ok. today`s homework is done
>> And the second question is exactly what I tell you. The answer is "everything".  When my twin kids smile at me, I always feel relaxed and comfortable. Ok. today`s homework is done.
Good night teacher QUENNY. ^-^
>> Good night teacher QUENNY. ^-^(CORRECT) 
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Hi teacher QUENNY ^-^
The second time we meet on the phone in order to upgrade my english skill was very impressive to me.
Anyway, teacher QUENNY, as far as I ask for the word named "spontaneous" I might think that you don`t hear that because my pronunciation is bad. ^^. what does mean "spontaneous" exactly . I was looking dictionary and read meaning but I don`t know what it mean exactly.
By the way back to the main issue, I prefer relaxing weekends while doing active ones. As I mentioned before, I have two lovely kids.
They are twins, one is boy, the other is girl.
Therefore, I will choose either saturday or sunday and we have a good time for enjoying at the outside of park or amusement, somewhere
where we belong together.
And second question is exactly what I tell you Answer is "everything" When my twin kids smile at me, I always feel relaxing and comfotable. Ok. today`s homework is done
Good night teacher QUENNY. ^-^



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