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담당 강사 님께서 ‘문법 오류 교정’ 과 ‘더 나은 영어식 표현’으로 교정해주는
서비스 입니다.

It seeme like a family birthday party.

작성자: 박*영
2022-08-11 1190

회원님의 영작문

Hello. teacher~~
It is rained again today. There are many flooding places. There were many accidents.
We are sacry, But We'll overcome it. Than you for your concern.

It seeme like a family birthday party. Looks very happy.
There is a women in the middle who is the birthday girl.
She is holding a cake and smiling broadly.
On either side, her cute daughters are looking and smiling.
Behind her looks like a husband.

My husband is putting his arms around mom and dad.
and he looks really close.
The white cake is unique. I thnink the mother made it is for her daughter.

Looking at this picture, it seems like a very happy family

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Soolyn! Try to avoid the flooded areas and do not walk on the streets if there are still water. Take care!
-Faith-
Hello. teacher~~
>> Hello, teacher!~~
It is rained again today. 
>> It rains again today.
There are many flooding places. There were many accidents.
>> There are many flooded places and accidents.
We are sacry, But We'll overcome it. 
>> We are scared, but we will overcome it. 
Than you for your concern.
>> 
Thank you for your concern.
It seeme like a family birthday party. Looks very happy.
>> It seems that a family birthday party is enjoyable or fun.
There is a women in the middle who is the birthday girl.
>> The woman in the middle is the birthday girl.
She is holding a cake and smiling broadly.
>> CORRECT
On either side, her cute daughters are looking and smiling.
>> On both sides are her cute daughters, looking and smiling at her.
Behind her looks like a husband.
>> The man behind her looks like her husband.
My husband is putting his arms around mom and dad.
and he looks really close.
>> Her husband puts his arms around his mother and father and he looks really close with them.
The white cake is unique. 
>> CORRECT
I thnink the mother made it is for her daughter.
>> I think the mother made it for her daughter.
Looking at this picture, it seems like a very happy family
>> By looking at this picture, it seems like they are a very happy family.
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