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What are the possible benefits of working on weekends? / What did you do last weekend? What will you

작성자: 박*태
2022-08-11 810

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Dear teacher QUENNY.
Today`s homework question is too many sub-question, so I decided to solely focus on 1 question, ^^
What are the possible benefits of working on weekends? That is my question,and Precisely this question inplies some philosophy, kind of whether I live what`s the position aiming of lifevalue or workvalue.
It`s not typical issue, powerful question through adults. My position is always to take care of my family as long as I live
Sometimes, workers just like me might have been pushing sort of working subject but, at that times, we have to be clear and made my
mind which one take either lifevalue or workvalue
We keep going balance with the these subject and as I firmly believe that working hard and love my family
As I mentioned before times, I told you that my lifevalue was a family, but also important to me as a career in my life
I tried to think of balancing this issue and then I will do at most my best to find this question, lifevalue or workvalue. Thanks its done^^

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용


Hi Justin,
The weekend helps you work smart during the week. In short, relaxing well on the weekend helps you reclaim your life.  Invest in your social health and use the weekend to strengthen your connections with your family and friends. And the weekend is a great time to spend a few moments planning your upcoming week. 
Working on weekends increased overtime opportunities, more responsibility, and often better pay. "Spice up your weekends." Teacher QUENNY..

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Dear teacher QUENNY.
>>Dear Teacher QUENNY, 
Today`s homework question is too many sub-question, so I decided to solely focus on 1 question, ^^
>> Today's homework question has too many sub-question, so I decided to solely focus on 1 question. ^^
What are the possible benefits of working on weekends? 
>> What are the possible benefits of working on weekends? (CORRECT) 
That is my question,and Precisely this question inplies some philosophy, kind of whether I live what`s the position aiming of lifevalue or workvalue.
>> That is my question, and precisely this question implies some philosophy, kind of whether I live what`s the position aiming for life value or work value.
It`s not typical issue, powerful question through adults. 
>> It`s not a typical issue and a powerful question among adults.
My position is always to take care of my family as long as I live.
>> My position is always to take care of my family as long as I'm still living here on earth and that's also my responsibility as the head of the family.  
Sometimes, workers just like me might have been pushing sort of working subject but, at that times, we have to be clear and made my mind which one take either lifevalue or workvalue.
>> Sometimes, typical workers just like me might have been pushing sort of working subject but, at those times, we have to clear our mind and decide which one take either life value or work value.
We keep going balance with the these subject and as I firmly believe that working hard and love my family.
>> We keep going on work-life balance with these subjects and I firmly believe that working hard and loving my family at the same time is a great choice. 
As I mentioned before times, I told you that my lifevalue was a family, but also important to me as a career in my life.
>> As I mentioned before times, I told you that my life value was my family, but my career is also important to me and in my life. 
I tried to think of balancing this issue and then I will do at most my best to find this question, lifevalue or workvalue. Thanks its done^^.
>>I tried to think of balancing this issue and then I will do my best at most to find this question, life value or work value. Thanks, it's done^^.

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Dear teacher QUENNY.
Today`s homework question is too many sub-question, so I decided to solely focus on 1 question, ^^
What are the possible benefits of working on weekends? That is my question,and Precisely this question inplies some philosophy, kind of whether I live what`s the position aiming of lifevalue or workvalue.
It`s not typical issue, powerful question through adults. My position is always to take care of my family as long as I live
Sometimes, workers just like me might have been pushing sort of working subject but, at that times, we have to be clear and made my
mind which one take either lifevalue or workvalue
We keep going balance with the these subject and as I firmly believe that working hard and love my family
As I mentioned before times, I told you that my lifevalue was a family, but also important to me as a career in my life
I tried to think of balancing this issue and then I will do at most my best to find this question, lifevalue or workvalue. Thanks its done^^
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