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Are there any rules in your country about eating in public?

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Korea has some rules about eating. It is related with manners.
When you eating, You don't put your elbow on the table.
And do not lift up your bowl of rice. but interestingly in Japan, that behavior is a good manner.
Also we have to quite when we eat sometings. but it is most countries manner.
And you don't rummage throught the food.!

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Hello Eun Chae!
Thanks for sharing some of your manners in eating.  Check your prepositions in your sentences and spelling when writing. Learn more! ^^

~T. Maine

Korea has some rules about eating. 
>> Korea has some rules on eating. 
It is related with manners.
>>It is related to manners. 
When you eating, You don't put your elbow on the table. 
And do not lift up your bowl of rice. 
>> When you are eating, you don't put your elbow on the table and do not lift up your bowl of rice. 
but interestingly in Japan, that behavior is a good manner.
>> But interestingly in Japan, that behavior is a good manner. 
Also we have to quite when we eat sometings. but it is most countries manner.
>> Also we have to be quiet when we eat sometimes, but it is most of the countries' manner.
And you don't rummage throught the food.!
>> And you don't rummage through the food. 
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