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Tell me your favorite music genre and the reason you like it.

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my favorite music genre is ballad
do you know ballad? i think most foreign people don't know about it
because ballad is not famous than k-pop
but the reason why i love ballad than kpop is you know i really love singing
but k-pop is so hard to sing at the karaoke however ballad always makes me hustle to sing it
and the ballad songs mostly consist about the love story
so lyrics make me feel moved. that why i love this genre

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Hello Robin!
You got a good idea for this topic.  But remember the grammar rules when making sentences.  Memorize the suggested sentences.  As much as possible repeat the correct patterns in speaking too so you will get used to them. ^^


~T. Maine

my favorite music genre is ballad
>>My favorite music genre is ballad. 
do you know ballad? i think most foreign people don't know about it
>>Do you know ballad songs?  I  think most foreign people don't know about it. 
because ballad is not famous than k-pop
>> It is because ballad is not as famous as K-pop. 
but the reason why i love ballad than kpop is you know i really love singing
>> But the reason why I love it more than K-poo is you know I really love singing. 
but k-pop is so hard to sing at the karaoke however ballad always makes me hustle to sing it
>> But K-pop is so hard to sing at karaoke.  In contrast to that, ballad always makes me hustle to sing it. 
and the ballad songs mostly consist about the love story
so lyrics make me feel moved. 
>> And ballad songs mostly consist of love stories so the lyrics make me feel moved. 
that why i love this genre
>> That's why I love this genre. 

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