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What do you do to keep fit?

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Dear Quenny. The last time we talk about something in the subject of our class was a 3 days ago.^^
Finally I had spent my whole summer vacation in the Busan city, It`s a great time for me and for my family.
After all, I do write my homework now, and I write rest of vacant my enligsh homework
Well, the first question of our subject is what do you do to keep fit?
As I mentioned before, I told you that I was able to adjust my weight for my healthy living
So I always consider something, which I go to the gym. But I lost everyday practice based on my busy schedule.
I thought that the better ones everyday excersize with on my heart.
But I lost my running schedule due to my busy everyday`s rountine.
Be the one and cheer up!! I never hesitate my excersize time when I got my gym.

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Hi Justin, 
Maintaining a physically fit body will overall make you stronger, and live a healthy lifestyle. Being physically fit will improve the performance of all the muscles in your body including your heart, and helps with, balance, power, speed, coordination, and many more aspects. Exercise not only helps you live longer and it also helps you live better. In addition to making your heart and muscles stronger and fending off a host of diseases, it can also improve your mental and emotional functioning and even bolster your productivity and close relationships. " FIT is not a destination is a way of LIFE" ~ Teacher QUENNY..:) 



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Dear Quenny. The last time we talk about something in the subject of our class was a 3 days ago.^^
>> Dear Quenny,
The last time we talk about something in the subject of our class was 3 days ago.^^
Finally I had spent my whole summer vacation in the Busan city, It`s a great time for me and for my family.
>>Finally, I spent my whole summer vacation in Busan city, It was a great time for me and for my family.
After all, I do write my homework now, and I write rest of vacant my enligsh homework.
>>After all, I do write my homework now, and I write about my English homework during the rest of my vacant time. 
Well, the first question of our subject is what do you do to keep fit?
>> Well, the first question of our subject is what do you do to keep fit?(CORRECT)
As I mentioned before, I told you that I was able to adjust my weight for my healthy living.
>>  As I mentioned before, I told you that I was able to adjust my weight for me to have a healthy living.
So I always consider something, which I go to the gym. But I lost everyday practice based on my busy schedule.
>> So I always consider something, which I go to the gym but I lost my everyday practice due to my busy schedule.
I thought that the better ones everyday excersize with on my heart.
>> I thought that the better one is an everyday exercise with my heart.
But I lost my running schedule due to my busy everyday`s rountine.
>> But I lost my running schedule due to my busy daily routine.
Be the one and cheer up!! I never hesitate my excersize time when I got my gym.
>> Be the one and cheer up!! I never hesitate during my exercise time when I go to the gym.
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Dear Quenny. The last time we talk about something in the subject of our class was a 3 days ago.^^
Finally I had spent my whole summer vacation in the Busan city, It`s a great time for me and for my family.
After all, I do write my homework now, and I write rest of vacant my enligsh homework
Well, the first question of our subject is what do you do to keep fit?
As I mentioned before, I told you that I was able to adjust my weight for my healthy living
So I always consider something, which I go to the gym. But I lost everyday practice based on my busy schedule.
I thought that the better ones everyday excersize with on my heart.
But I lost my running schedule due to my busy everyday`s rountine.
Be the one and cheer up!! I never hesitate my excersize time when I got my gym.
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