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Why I think surrounded by good people is good.

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I think being surrounded by good people is good.
Because when I'm surrounded by good people, they will give me good advice for me.
Second, they will give me cheer too.
Third, they will don't do any bad things to me.
Last, I can be a good person too.

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Hi Joey! Thanks for doing your homework!  I enjoyed reading your answer. Please always surround yourself with good people. Keep safe!

~T. Annie


I think being surrounded by good people is good.
>>Correct!
Because when I'm surrounded by good people, they will give me good advice for me.
>>Because when I'm surrounded by good people, I can receive good advice from them.
Second, they will give me cheer too.
OR>>Second, they can cheer me up too.
Third, they will don't do any bad things to me.
>>Third, they won't do any bad things to me.
Last, I can be a good person too.
>>Lastly, I can be a good person as well.
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