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We need to know the difference between schools and day care centers.

Above all, it is tortue that children have to stay outside until 8 pm.

It is also not good policy for children's health and emotional stability.

Children should rest after school for normal growth.

Of course, as working parents, some children use day care service inevitably.

Even n that case, it is better place not schools but local day care ceners.

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Good day, Ms. Lily!
I guess the government should consider the pros and cons of this proposal. They have to check the welfare of the child, whether it's beneficial or not. Thank you for sharing!
See you~
Aki~

We need to know the difference between schools and day care centers.
>>> CORRECT!
Above all, it is tortue that children have to stay outside until 8 pm.
>>> Above all, it is a torture for children to stay outside until 8 pm.
It is also not good policy for children's health and emotional stability.
>>> CORRECT!
Children should rest after school for normal growth.
>>> CORRECT!
Of course, as working parents, some children use day care service inevitably.
>>> CORRECT!
Even n that case, it is better place not schools but local day care centers.\
>>> CORRECT!
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