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Hi, Donna.
It's nine PM, and I am at home.
I am so happy to finish my work early today.
So, I could be back home early, and my wife and I talked about our children and housework.
In addition, my wife prepared some delicious foods for me, thus I was so glad to eat them.
One more thing, I had one beer.
This is a grateful Wednesday.
Now, I think about the homework.
As you know, I belong to the Franchise company about dermatologic clinics.
Sometimes we need to make an appointment with other doctors.
In this situation, I usually ask them which dates they will be free.
After deciding the date, we will talk about the location.
For everyone, we will calculate the distance from each position, and then we will confirm the appointment.
I think this is reasonable.
When someone want to meet me, I usually tell them that I want them to visit me in lunch time.
That's because our lunch time is for 90 minutes, so we have enough time.
See you soon.

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Good day, Dr. Kim!

Congratulations for finishing work early last night! Consequently, you read a book and got engrossed by it hence, your red eyes today. ^^ Having a meal prepared by your wife and a can of beer is an excellent way to end your day.

Meeting so many people is a part of one's profession and in your case, expanding your business just means that you will need so many associates as well as clients to serve. Being on time and addressing one another's needs is the goal of these appointments to increase productivity and overall profit. So, it must be made clear, who, when, where, and why is the appointment is being called for.

Thank you for making it to our daily English appointment. You are always on time and ready for the lesson. This homework answer had few grammar suggestions. Look them up below and apply them on your next compositions. Your consistency is remarkable and highly commendable.

Have a smooth and light Thursday.

-T. Donna~

Hi, Donna.
>> Correct!

It's nine PM, and I am at home.
>> Correct!
Or: It's 9PM and I am at home.

I am so happy to finish my work early today.
>> Correct!

So, I could be back home early, and my wife and I talked about our children and housework.
>> Correct!

In addition, my wife prepared some delicious foods for me, thus I was so glad to eat them.
>> Correct!

One more thing, I had one beer.
>> Correct!

This is a grateful Wednesday.
>> This is a great Wednesday!

Now, I think about the homework.
>> Correct!
Or: Now, I am thinking about tht homework.

As you know, I belong to the Franchise company about dermatologic clinics.
>> As you know, I belong to a franchise company about dermatologic clinics.

Sometimes we need to make an appointment with other doctors.
>> Correct!
Or: Sometimes, we need to make an appointment with other doctors.

In this situation, I usually ask them which dates they will be free.
>> Correct!

After deciding the date, we will talk about the location.
>> Correct!

For everyone, we will calculate the distance from each position, and then we will confirm the appointment.
>> Correct!

I think this is reasonable.
>> Correct!

When someone want to meet me, I usually tell them that I want them to visit me in lunch time.
>> When someone wants to meet me, I usually tell (him/her/ that person) that I want thim to visit me at lunch time.
Or: When someone wants to meet me, I usually tell (him/her/ that person) to visit me at lunch time.

That's because our lunch time is for 90 minutes, so we have enough time.
>> Correct!

See you soon.
>> Correct!
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