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The best part of my job is traveling a lot of countries, but because of this, we are short of spending time with our family.

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Hi, Chris!
Thank you for always sending me your compositions. I hope your family can understand why you can't spend time with them. That's the saddest part of an employee when they have business trips abroad. They can't bring their family with them. 
~Teacher Erin

The best part of my job is traveling a lot of countries,
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 but because of this, we are short of spending time with our family.
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