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Then, if the person is a man, he could feel alone because there is none about him.

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Hey there, Kane!

Thank you for your homework submission. I agree that a person that has no one would feel lonely.
It is vital for us to have someone to lean on especially during our hard times. 

I'll see you in our class later^^

~ Teacher Gela

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