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HOMEWORK:
Do you like commercials on television and social media? Answer in a few sentences.

My mom turns on TV as soon as arrived at home. I think she hates silence. But I don't enjoy watching TV because there are so many commercials. TV commercials feel like noise to me dislike my mom.

Thank you Donna!

Have a smooth Monday too!

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Hi there, Hae Ju!

You are right. Commercials are actually competing to catch our attention they could get annoying due to different music, voices, as well as other many other ways for us to watch them.

Anyway, your sentences are very clearly stated with just a few grammar comments such as the determiner 'the' and additional words to make your sentence even better at tha later part. Thank you so much for accomplidhing this homework answer quickly today.

See you again on Wednesday! Great job!

-T. Donna~

My mom turns on TV as soon as arrived at home. 
>> My mom turns on the TV as soon as she arrives at home. 

I think she hates silence. 
>> Correct!

But I don't enjoy watching TV because there are so many commercials. 
>> Correct!

TV commercials feel like noise to me dislike my mom.
>> TV commercials feel like noise to me, I dislike it with my mom.

Thank you Donna!
>> Correct!

Have a smooth Monday too!
>> Correct!
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