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If you could learn more about another sport just like archery, what would it be and why?

작성자: 김*연
2022-08-29 889

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I would like to learn how to swim well. Actually I learned swimming for three month. So I can swim in breaststroke and backstroke. However, that is all. I stopped to go to the swimming pool because it was getting cold. It was hard to get up early in winter. I regret about it. So if I can have a chance to learn swimming again, I will master until the freestyle.
And there is one more sport that I hope to learn. It is an archery, I felt it's pleasure when I pull a string!!! I can have a chance to learn it here, my area. They told me that if you want to learn how to archery, you can come every Saturday afternoon. So I hope to learn it!!!!

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Arissa! 

Thank you so much for sharing your answer regarding my question. 
It was nice to know that you would like to learn more about swimming and archery.
I hope that you'll be able to learn them. Those will be really fun and they would definitely help provide a lot of benefits specially to health. ^^ 

~ Teacher Gina


I would like to learn how to swim well. Actually I learned swimming for three month. So I can swim in breaststroke and backstroke. However, that is all. I stopped to go to the swimming pool because it was getting cold. It was hard to get up early in winter. I regret about it. So if I can have a chance to learn swimming again, I will master until the freestyle.
And there is one more sport that I hope to learn. It is an archery, I felt it's pleasure when I pull a string!!! I can have a chance to learn it here, my area. They told me that if you want to learn how to archery, you can come every Saturday afternoon. So I hope to learn it!!!!

>> I would like to learn how to swim well. Actually, I learned how to swim for three months. So I can swim breaststroke and backstroke. However, that is all. I stopped going to the swimming pool because it was getting cold. It was hard to get up early in winter. I regret it. So if I can have a chance to learn swimming again, I will master freestyle.
And there is one more sport that I hope to learn. It is archery. I feel it's a pleasure when I pull a string!!! I can have a chance to learn it here, in my area. They told me that you could come every Saturday afternoon if you want to learn how to do archery. So I hope to learn it!!!!
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