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What would you do if you found 100 euros or dollars in the street?

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If I found 100 dollars, I will get to police office. And I will ask to find 100 dollars owner. If the 100 dollars owner is not exist, I will save money half of that, and give to 30 dollars to my parents. And I will use 20 dollars to buy my necessary items.

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Hi, Daisy!
Wow, that was a brilliant answer. You were able to think of an idea by giving the money to the rightful owner, and you also did great for saving and spending your money wisely. Keep it up! ^_^
~Teacher Erin

If I found 100 dollars, I will get to police office.
>>If I found 100 dollars, I will surrender it to the police officer.
 And I will ask to find 100 dollars owner.
>>CORRECT
 If the 100 dollars owner is not exist,
>>If the 100 dollars owner does not exist,
 I will save money half of that,
>>CORRECT
 and give to 30 dollars to my parents.
>>and give 30 dollars to my parents.
 And I will use 20 dollars to buy my necessary items.
>>CORRECT
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