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Does any particular food bring back any special memories for you?

작성자: 김*경
2022-09-06 1743

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Fried rice with various ingredients called "Bokeun Bap" sometimes brings back the related memory of my childhood. According to my Mom, I was so finicky about food in my childhood that she had suffered from my ill-balanced eating. So she tried offering me various meals with delicious ingredients to encourage my eating. Finally, She made it with fried rice. Afterward, my ill-balanced eating was fixed. Whenever my Mom sees the fired rice on that table, she tells me that story joyfully. As a father of three children, now I can understand how hard my Mom had gone through raising two mischievous boys.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good afternoon, Steve! ^_^)//

It makes sense that fried rice is one of the most widely consumed rice dishes in the world. The appeal of fried rice for the home cook is that it is incredibly flexible. It's ideal for nights when you're clearing out the refrigerator and want to get rid of any leftover meat or vegetables.

Thank you so much for this composition.

__T. Mayleen :)


Fried rice with various ingredients called "Bokeun Bap" sometimes brings back the related memory of my childhood.
>>> Bokkeum-bap (fried rice with various ingredients) sometimes brings back related memories of my childhood.
According to my Mom, I was so finicky about food in my childhood that she had suffered from my ill-balanced eating.
>>> According to my mom, I was so finicky about food in my childhood that she suffered from my ill-balanced eating.
>>> OR: My mother claims that because I was such a picky eater as a child, she suffered from my unbalanced diet.
So she tried offering me various meals with delicious ingredients to encourage my eating.
>>> CORRECT
>>> OR: So she made an effort to provide me with a variety of meals that were filled with tasty components.
Finally, She made it with fried rice. Afterward, my ill-balanced eating was fixed.
>>> Finally, she made it with fried rice. Afterward, my ill-balanced eating was fixed.
>>> OR: She finally used fried rice to make it. My unbalanced eating was then corrected.
Whenever my Mom sees the fired rice on that table, she tells me that story joyfully.
>>> Whenever my mom sees the fired rice on that table, she tells me that story joyfully.
>>> OR: When my mother notices the rice that has been burned on the table, she tells me that tale with delight.
As a father of three children, now I can understand how hard my Mom had gone through raising two mischievous boys.
>>> As a father of three children, now I can understand how hard my mom has gone through raising two mischievous boys.
>>> OR: I can now appreciate how challenging it must have been for my mother to raise two naughty sons because I am the father of three kids.
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