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In Korea, english education is though to be very important.
Most of the parents teach english to their children at early age.
I also started english at 7 years old.
I studied english hard for Suneung which is university entrance exam in Korea.
When I was an university students, I read english textbooks for biology and studied Toeic.
Now I often find new journals.
I've kept in touch with english for approximately 25 years, but I'm still afraid of english.
Especially speaking in English is harder than reading and writing.
It's difficult to recall the proper words which I'm planning to tell although the words are simple.
Whenever I meet foreigners, I find myself to hesistate speaking english.
I hope to overcome these situations, and I began telephone english class with Donna.
Even though I feel it difficult to tell what I think of, my english speaking skill is slightly improved.
I have not much time to study english, but I try to concentrate on english effectively during a short time.

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Good morning, Dr. Stella!

I think that the time to study English is not the most important thing but the quality of instruction and the speech you produce during that time. Of course, if our time were loner, you have more oppostunity to speak. So far, you are doing so well. So, thank you for sharing what you think about your English skills for over two decades.

Below are some suggestion on the correst capitalization of the word "English and TOEIC, " as a proper noun; insertions of 'an' and 'to'; some correct diction (correct choice of words); among others. Go over them and memorize the patterns. Nonetheless, excellent composition!

See you again later!

-T Donna~

In Korea, english education is though to be very important.
>> Correct!
Or:  In Korea, English education is thought to be very important.

Most of the parents teach english to their children at early age.
>> Most of the parents teach English to their children at an early age.

I also started english at 7 years old.
>> Correct!

I studied english hard for Suneung which is university entrance exam in Korea.
>> I studied English hard for Suneung which is a university entrance exam in Korea.

When I was an university students, I read english textbooks for biology and studied Toeic.
>> When I was a university student, I read english textbooks for biology and studied TOEIC.

Now I often find new journals.
>> Correct!

I've kept in touch with english for approximately 25 years, but I'm still afraid of english.
>> I've communicated with English for approximately 25 years, but I'm still afraid of it.

Especially speaking in English is harder than reading and writing.
>> Correct!
Or: Speaking in English is espcecially harder than reading and writing.

It's difficult to recall the proper words which I'm planning to tell although the words are simple.
>> Correct!

Whenever I meet foreigners, I find myself to hesistate speaking english.
>> Whenever I meet foreigners, I find myself hesistating to speak English.

I hope to overcome these situations, and I began telephone english class with Donna.
>> Correct!
>> Or: English 

Even though I feel it difficult to tell what I think of, my english speaking skill is slightly improved.
>> Even though I feel that it is difficult to tell what I think of, my English speaking skills have slightly improved.

I have not much time to study english, but I try to concentrate on english effectively during a short time.
>> Correct!
Or: I have not much time to study English, but I try to concentrate on it effectively during a short time.

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