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Does your community have outdoor exercise equipment? Is it free to use? Who uses it?

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There are some community facilities in my apartment. We have a basketball, badmintan court and outdoor exercise equipments, but we don't have a swimming pool and other recreation facilities. It is essetial to have those facilities at the beginning of the design of apartment these days. It would be exclusive benifits to residents, although people need to extra payment to maintain facilities. In addition, it increases house value that gives a chance to make money as a investment. Most companies are situated in metropolitan areas. and people would like to live near their company. This is the major reason why house price hike in capital city. To be the best villiage, constructors add amenities, exercise equipment and something unique. It is usually free to use, if they are residents but some facilities need to pay to use it. It depends on the regulation of regidential members.

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Good day, Sir Hwang!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

There are some community facilities in my apartment. 
>> CORRECT! 
We have a basketball, badmintan court and outdoor exercise equipments, but we don't have a swimming pool and other recreation facilities. 
>> We have a basketball, badminton court, and other outdoor exercise equipments; but we don't have a swimming pool and other recreation facilities. 
It is essetial to have those facilities at the beginning of the design of apartment these days. 
>> It is essential to have those facilities at the beginning of the design of apartment these days. 
It would be exclusive benifits to residents, although people need to extra payment to maintain facilities. 
>> It would be exclusive benefits to residents, although people need to pay extra charges to maintain facilities. 
In addition, it increases house value that gives a chance to make money as a investment. 
>> In addition, it increases house value that gives a chance to make money as an investment. 
Most companies are situated in metropolitan areas. 
>> CORRECT! 
and people would like to live near their company. 
>> And because of that, people would like to live near their company. 
This is the major reason why house price hike in capital city. 
>> This is the major reason why house prices increase in the capital city. 
To be the best villiage, constructors add amenities, exercise equipment and something unique. 
>> To be the best village, constructors add amenities, exercise equipment and something unique. 
It is usually free to use, if they are residents but some facilities need to pay to use it. 
>> It is usually free to use, if they are residents but some facilities needed to be paid to be able to use it. 
It depends on the regulation of regidential members.
>> It depends on the regulation of residential members.

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