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Hi there, Donna T.
I worried that too many patients may come to our clinic after long holidays, but fortunately there are little clients this morning.
After Seven hours...
As time goes by, more patients came here. hahaha.
Anyway, as you know, I need a money, so it will be a big deal that small number of patients came to my clinic.
Thus I can enjoy my busy day.
Meanwhile I have a question.
We are almost done with our book.
After it's done, which book do you recommend?
Because you know my level, I want you to select one.
Regarding today's homework, I can say I am not interested in fashion trends.
Of course, I like beautiful clothes, shoes, and accessories.
However, as I told you, I am bad at fashion.
If I try to improve my fashion level, it can be possible.
But, I don't have to do that.
That's because I have a lot of work to do everyday, and I have a wife with a good sense of fashion.
In addition, I have a red car and Rolex watch.
That's enough.
How about you?
Catch you tomorrow~

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Hi there, Dr. Kim. Good evening!

Post holiday patients can really be flocking by your clinic soon due to some food allergy or skin treatments. After all, the season is changing there in your country, so brace yourselves in the next coming days.

Regrading your book, Free Talking books include 1 (the one we are using right now), 2, and 3. I will show you Free Talking Book 2 tomorrow and the other book recommendations so that you can decide which book is the most helpful for your speech development.

As of fashion, I can say that I have a high expectation on fashion. You may not see it in class but when I am out there during events, I dress up as elegant as I can. It is work-related of course. During an ordinary day, I go simple but high-fashion. Needless to say, I place emphasis on simple but functional style by highlighting a color or a striking piece of clothing. Perhaps the fashion we choose is from the workfield we come from.

Then, than you so much for complying to answer this homework. Your consistency in your writing style, your application of the grammar suggestions in class, as well as your confidence in incorporating vocabulary  are very satisfactory. Carry on!

Have a wonderful evening!

-T. Donna~

Hi there, Donna T.
>> Correct!
Or: Hi there, T. Donna.

I worried that too many patients may come to our clinic after long holidays, but fortunately there are little clients this morning.
>> I worried that too many patients may come to our clinic after the long holidays, but fortunately there were a few clients this morning.

After Seven hours...
As time goes by, more patients came here. hahaha.
>> After seven hours, as time went by, more patients came here, hahaha!

Anyway, as you know, I need a money, so it will be a big deal that small number of patients came to my clinic.
>> Anyway, as you know, I need money, so it will be a big deal if a small number of patients came to my clinic.

Thus I can enjoy my busy day.
>> Correct!
Or: Thus, I can enjoy my busy day.

Meanwhile I have a question.
>> Correct!

We are almost done with our book.
>> Correct!

After it's done, which book do you recommend?
>> Correct!

Because you know my level, I want you to select one.
>> Correct!

Regarding today's homework, I can say I am not interested in fashion trends.
>> Correct!

Of course, I like beautiful clothes, shoes, and accessories.
>> Correct!

However, as I told you, I am bad at fashion.
>> Correct!

If I try to improve my fashion level, it can be possible.
>> Correct!

But, I don't have to do that.
>> Correct!

That's because I have a lot of work to do everyday, and I have a wife with a good sense of fashion.
>> Correct!

In addition, I have a red car and Rolex watch.
>> In addition, I have a red car and a Rolex watch.

That's enough.
>> Correct!

How about you?
>> Correct!

Catch you tomorrow~
>> Correct!
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