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Homework

작성자: 김*우
2022-09-14 2337

회원님의 영작문

Good evening, T. Donna.
There were so many patients in our clinic today.
Meanwhile, there's been good news.
Three new members joined our workplace.
And two new members will join us tomorrow.
There were many changes in staff members.
I hope that the current staffs won't leave anymore, but I know it's impossible.
I was tired and hungry, so I asked my wife to order delicious chicken for me.
After this homework, I will drive home with full of joy.
As you can see above, my wife and I are good at each other.
When I need something, she know it and do something for me.
Also, if she need something, I will do everything as possible as I can.
To keep a good marriage, we should try to do everything if possible.
Sexual desire has a limitation absolutely.
I think a couple live together with loyalty.
Human can't believe others perfectly, even if it means love or family.
We just have to try to believe my people, and try to be a best person.
Without trying, no soulmate exists, I think.
See you.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, good evening, Dr. Kim!

Congratulations to you and your clinic for having so many patients enter your door today for their clinic needs. May it always be busy as busy is good and it means profit from your quality service. With the additional member of your team and staff, your productivity will increase. I fondly hope that these staff will be able to find contentment and meaning in their jobs enough to make them stay for a long while.

Anyway, willingness and kindness are the key to a happy marriage as what you have mentioned below. Loyalty as well is very much needed because a lot of attractive people are out there but when there is committment and loyalty, we are fixed to loving someone even when s/he grows old and physical bauty fades. We have to be the best person indeed as what you have stated, to have a blissful and perfect marriage.

A great percentage of your homework answer is composed of correct sentences. Keep up the very good skill in writing! Well done!

See you tomorrow!

-T. Donna~

Good evening, T. Donna.
>> Correct!

There were so many patients in our clinic today.
>> Correct!

Meanwhile, there's been good news.
>> Correct!

Three new members joined our workplace.
>> Correct!

And two new members will join us tomorrow.
>> Correct!

There were many changes in staff members.
>> Correct!

I hope that the current staffs won't leave anymore, but I know it's impossible.
>> Correct!

I was tired and hungry, so I asked my wife to order delicious chicken for me.
>> Correct!

After this homework, I will drive home with full of joy.
>> Correct!

As you can see above, my wife and I are good at each other.
>> Correct!

When I need something, she know it and do something for me.
>> When I need something, she knows it and does something for me.

Also, if she need something, I will do everything as possible as I can.
>> Also, if she needs something, I will do everything as possible as I can.

To keep a good marriage, we should try to do everything if possible.
>> Correct!

Sexual desire has a limitation absolutely.
>> Correct!

I think a couple live together with loyalty.
>> I think a couple should live together with loyalty.

Human can't believe others perfectly, even if it means love or family.
>> Correct!

We just have to try to believe my people, and try to be a best person.
>> We just have to try to believe our people, and try to be the best person.

Without trying, no soulmate exists, I think.
>> Correct!

See you.
>> Correct!

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