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What is your opinion about the joint military training of South Korea and the United States to deter

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Koreans have a strong relationship with the USA. We have a agreement to protect Korea from other countries, especially, North Korea. My country is only one which is seperated with two part in the world, so it is considered as the most dangerous country of the world. For those reason, regular millitary training have to be performed by ourselves and with the USA army. I don't understand why North Korea sensitive is about the joint military training. It is just for regular practice to test how well we prepare on the war. It is one of the preparation to protect our peninsula from the potential risks. All countries exist for their citizens and do what they can do. It is part of the way to maintain their countries. Trainning always is proceeded within own country, so I think it is not matter that other countries intervene.

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Good day, Sir Hwang!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
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Koreans have a strong relationship with the USA. 
>> CORRECT! 
We have a agreement to protect Korea from other countries, especially, North Korea. 
>> We have an agreement to protect South Korea from other countries, especially, North Korea. 
My country is only one which is seperated with two part in the world, so it is considered as the most dangerous country of the world. 
>> My country is the only one which is separated into two parts in the world, so it is considered as the most dangerous country of the world. 
For those reason, regular millitary training have to be performed by ourselves and with the USA army. 
>> For that reason, regular millitary training has to be performed by ourselves and with the USA army. 
I don't understand why North Korea sensitive is about the joint military training. 
>> I don't understand why North Korea is sensitive about the joint military training. 
It is just for regular practice to test how well we prepare on the war. 
>> CORRECT! 
It is one of the preparation to protect our peninsula from the potential risks. 
>> CORRECT! 
All countries exist for their citizens and do what they can do. 
>> CORRECT! 
It is part of the way to maintain their countries. 
>> CORRECT! 
Trainning always is proceeded within own country, so I think it is not matter that other countries intervene.
>> Training is  always proceeded within one's country, so I think it does not matter that other countries intervene.


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