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Why is it important to have a mobile phone?

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Because I need to call and chat someone, to see other's blog or internet. And if we don't have the phone, then we can't know my friend's news and call anyone. So mobile phone is ver important to us.

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Hi, Daisy!
I agree with your answer. Nowadays, without a mobile phone is so difficult to communicate with our loved ones. 
~Teacher Erin

Because I need to call and chat someone,to see other's blog or internet.
>>I need to call and chat with someone and see others' blogs or the internet.
 And if we don't have the phone,
>>And if we don't have a phone,
then we can't know my friend's news and call anyone.
>>then, I can't know about my friend's latest posts and I can't call anyone.
 So mobile phone is ver important to us.
>>So the mobile phone is very important to us.
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