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1. I useually spend time having co-workders at airport
2. I will make money enough until I can purchase my own house
3. I very hate people who are conservative. Because I can't comunicate with them
4. What was the situation?
5. Are you looking for reasonable price?

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Thank you for taking the time to answer your homework today, Elic. Please review my corrections carefully, and then try to take notes of the corrections which you have noticed from them. Again, thank you and have a great day ahead! :)


1. I useually spend time having co-workders at airport
>> I usually spend time with my co-workers at the airport.
2. I will make money enough until I can purchase my own house
>> I will make enough money to purchase my own house.
3. I very hate people who are conservative. Because I can't comunicate with them
>> I hate conservative people because I can't communicate with them well.
4. What was the situation?
>> Correct. OR What is the situation?
5. Are you looking for reasonable price?
>> Are you looking for reasonable prices? OR Are you looking for a reasonable price?
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