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During workdays, where do you have lunch and who do you usually eat with?

작성자: 박*태
2022-09-19 1942

회원님의 영작문

I`m having a habit of eating less because I need to more stay in my weight at this time,
But unfortuneatly, I`m thin. I want to more control to my body check especially body weight.
So, during workdays I sometime didn`t go eating something and walking through some area nearby my office.
Instead of eatting something, I walk faster than normal working, after that I feel relaxed and more silm body I felt.
By the way I do have lunch with my colleague in the line with my team members.
While eating lunch somewhere we often visit place is a korean traditional dinning room
We like chatting with everyone, and talked with each other
We usually also eat hamberger, that`s delicious

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Justin,
Lunch is an important meal for everyone. It provides energy and nutrients to keep the body and brain working efficiently through the afternoon. And lunch not only provides your body with the fuel it needs to finish off the day, but it feeds our mental health too. "Don't skip Lunch" ~ Teacher QUENNY.

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I`m having a habit of eating less because I need to more stay in my weight at this time,
But unfortuneatly, I`m thin. 
>> I'm having a habit of eating less because I need to maintain my weight at this time, but unfortunately, I`m thin. 
I want to more control to my body check especially body weight.
>> I want to control my body health more especially in maintaining my body weight.
So, during workdays I sometime didn`t go eating something and walking through some area nearby my office.
>> So, during workdays, I sometimes don't go eat something and just walk through some area nearby my office.
Instead of eatting something, I walk faster than normal working, after that I feel relaxed and more silm body I felt.
>> Instead of eating something, I walk faster than normal walking like jogging, after that I feel relaxed and I feel that my body become slimmer. 
By the way I do have lunch with my colleague in the line with my team members.
>> By the way, I do have lunch with my colleague in line with my team members.
While eating lunch somewhere we often visit place is a korean traditional dinning room
>> While eating lunch somewhere we often visit the place known as the Korean traditional dining room. 
We like chatting with everyone, and talked with each other.
>> We like chatting with everyone and talking to each other about any topics. 
We usually also eat hamberger, that`s delicious
>> We usually eat Hamburger which really tastes delicious. 
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I`m having a habit of eating less because I need to more stay in my weight at this time,
But unfortuneatly, I`m thin. I want to more control to my body check especially body weight.
So, during workdays I sometime didn`t go eating something and walking through some area nearby my office.
Instead of eatting something, I walk faster than normal working, after that I feel relaxed and more silm body I felt.
By the way I do have lunch with my colleague in the line with my team members.
While eating lunch somewhere we often visit place is a korean traditional dinning room
We like chatting with everyone, and talked with each other
We usually also eat hamberger, that`s delicious




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