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Have you ever injured yourself while working out? What happened?

작성자: 박*태
2022-09-19 1733

회원님의 영작문

As I said before, I like exercising everyday. I want to walking faster in the gym at the working machine.
Moreover I tend to run at the edge of my running time. By the time I finish walking some targetted distance.
At that time, I run more faster than I do.
It`s called finishing walking , I mentioned myself.
During six month I was losing my weight approximately 10kg. It is so hard to do in the gym where I have been to
So, at the time I`m not exercsing , when it comes to add my weight slowly. so I run again in order to maintain my weight.
Nothing special in the meantime by excercising, I haven`t ever injured myself quiet yet.
A little bit more attend my attention in the memory of maching running usage, And I was ready to make a preparation time because
I do`nt want to have any harmness in particular exercising time

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용


Hi Justin, 
Regular exercise is good for your body and safe for almost everyone. However, with any type of activity, there is a chance you can get hurt. Exercise injuries can range from strains and sprains to back pain. With a little planning, you can prevent injury and stay safe during exercise." Stay safe while exercising" . ~ Teacher QUENNY..

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As I said before, I like exercising everyday. I want to walking faster in the gym at the working machine.
>> As I said before, I like to exercise regularly. I want to walk faster in the gym using the treadmill. 
Moreover I tend to run at the edge of my running time. By the time I finish walking some targetted distance. At that time, I run more faster than I do.
>>  Moreover, I tend to run at the edge of my running time. By the time I finish walking some targeted distance I want to run faster than I do.
It`s called finishing walking , I mentioned myself.
>> It`s called finishing walking, I mentioned myself.
During six month I was losing my weight approximately 10kg. It is so hard to do in the gym where I have been to
>> During six months I was losing weight approximately 10kg. It was so hard to do in the gym where I have been to. 
So, at the time I`m not exercsing , when it comes to add my weight slowly. so I run again in order to maintain my weight.
>> So, at the time I`m not exercising anymore, then I'm gaining weight slowly. That's why I run again in order to maintain my weight.
Nothing special in the meantime by excercising, I haven`t ever injured myself quiet yet.
>> I haven`t ever injured myself while doing exercise and nothing special in the meantime by exercising. 
A little bit more attend my attention in the memory of maching running usage, And I was ready to make a preparation time because I do`nt want to have any harmness in particular exercising time
>> I need to a little bit more focused my attention on the memory of matching running usage, and I was ready to make a preparation time because I don't want to experience any injury in particular while exercising. 
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As I said before, I like exercising everyday. I want to walking faster in the gym at the working machine.
Moreover I tend to run at the edge of my running time. By the time I finish walking some targetted distance.
At that time, I run more faster than I do.
It`s called finishing walking , I mentioned myself.
During six month I was losing my weight approximately 10kg. It is so hard to do in the gym where I have been to
So, at the time I`m not exercsing , when it comes to add my weight slowly. so I run again in order to maintain my weight.
Nothing special in the meantime by excercising, I haven`t ever injured myself quiet yet.
A little bit more attend my attention in the memory of maching running usage, And I was ready to make a preparation time because
I do`nt want to have any harmness in particular exercising time


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