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Is a concert better than a festival? Answer in a few sentences.

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I think it depends on which musicians do you want to see and how much do they prepare for the concert. I had two concerts in my life, and they were perfectly satisfying. Therefore, I can say a concert is worth watching and enjoying.

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Hello, Judy!

I totally agree with you. I have also been in concerts and they were included in the activities during festivals. Free concerts are the best since we do not have to pat for anything, just go and watch. Anyway, I hope that you can watch more concerts soon.

All of your sentences are correct, keep up the excellent work!

-T. Donna~

I think it depends on which musicians do you want to see and how much do they prepare for the concert. 
>> Correct!

I had two concerts in my life, and they were perfectly satisfying. 
>> Correct!

Therefore, I can say a concert is worth watching and enjoying.
>> Correct!
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