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What are some things you should do for a job interview? How about things you shouldn’t do?

작성자: 전*채
2022-09-27 2423

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When you prepare the job interview. You should do somethings.
First, you should know about company. It is beause each company has diffirent ideoigy. So we should know about company history and organization. If you know about this imformation you would be goog at the interview.
And you should prepare a formal outfit and neat clothes.
Apperence is also important when you meet them first.
They would be see you carefully.
And at least the first interview, you should not put on casual clothes.
Also you shouldn't speak vaguely. They would be think about you who don't have confidence.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello Eun Chae!
It is necessary to read a lot of information about a certain company and the job description you are applying for before you join an interview.  Research and practice are really a must for this preparation. ^^



~T. Maine


When you prepare the job interview. 
>> When you prepare for a job interview, 
You should do somethings.
>> you should do something helpful. 

First, you should know about company. 
>> First, you should know something about the company. 

It is beause each company has diffirent ideoigy. 
>> It is because each company has a different ideology. 

So we should know about company history and organization. 
>> So we should know about the company's history and organization. 

If you know about this imformation you would be goog at the interview.
>> If you know this information, you will search this on Google. 

And you should prepare a formal outfit and neat clothes.
>> Correct. 

Apperence is also important when you meet them first.
>> Appearance is also important when you meet the interviewers for the first time. 

They would be see you carefully.
>> They would see you carefully. 

And at least the first interview, you should not put on casual clothes.
>> And at least on your first interview, you should not wear casual clothes. 

Also you shouldn't speak vaguely. 
>> In addition, you shouldn't speak vaguely. 

They would be think about you who don't have confidence.
>> They would think that you don't have confidence. 

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