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I always reason music to be stable and to calm down my mind. It is my reward to myself.

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Good evening, Kane!

Thank you for sharing this bit of information about yourself. Listening to music is one of my favorite ways to unwind. You can totally try listening to podcast! I am sure you will enjoy it too.

See you in our next lessin^^
~ Teacher Gela

I always reason music to be stable and to calm down my mind. 
>> I always listen to music to be stable and calm my mind down.

It is my reward to myself.
>> CORRECT
OR > It is my treat to myself.
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