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The first benefit is that if you want to learn a language, it will be the best opportunity.
Because you have a lot of time for exposure time.
Also you can get new experiences that can¡¯t experience in your country while staying there.
These are very good foundation for life.
The drawback is that you might get lonely because you have to stay away from your family.

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Hi, Erin! (^__^)

Spending a year working abroad has numerous benefits, including the chance to experience a new culture and save money. You'll also make new friends and discover new foods and ways of thinking as you fearlessly step into the unknown.

However, it's challenging to effortlessly integrate into a completely new culture with all of its varied social customs and work practices.

Have a good weekend!^^

__T. Mayleen :)



The first benefit is that if you want to learn a language, it will be the best opportunity.
Because you have a lot of time for exposure time.
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>>> OR: The first advantage is that you will have a lot of exposure, making this the finest opportunity to learn a language.
Also you can get new experiences that can¡¯t experience in your country while staying there.
These are very good foundation for life.
>>> Also, you can get new experiences that you can¡¯t get in your country while staying there. These are very good foundations for life.
The drawback is that you might get lonely because you have to stay away from your family.
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>>> OR: The disadvantage is that when you have to be apart from your family, you could experience loneliness.
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