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I think independent movies's goal is different from other movies. They don't want to earn much money through the movies.
Instead of earning money, they are making things they have dreamed. What we watch the independent movies is working for enriching the movie industry. Many movies are made of same stories.
which is why we have been boring about stories in current .

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Happy Friday, Rachel!
Thank you for doing your homework. I agree that independent movies can enrich the movie industry because they offer new and unique contents that are way different than what we usually watch.
-T. Caitlyn
I think independent movies's goal is different from other movies. 
>> I think independent movies' goal is different from other movies. 
They don't want to earn much money through the movies.
>> CORRECT
Instead of earning money, they are making things they have dreamed. 
>> Instead of earning money, they are making movies because it's something they dreamed of.
What we watch the independent movies is working for enriching the movie industry. 
>> Watching independent movies can enrich the movie industry.
Many movies are made of same stories. which is why we have been boring about stories in current .
>> Many movies have the same stories that is why we find it the stories boring nowadays.
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