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1. What are you deficient stuff?
2. Are you a rich of nutrients?
3. I have to get a good health in far future
4. What different your cultures compare to South Korea
5. What did you choose a optimal thing?

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Hi there Elic, thank you for answering this homework! Your sentences were very nice. I am happy that your punctuations and capitalizations are now correct. Again, it's good to make question type sentences, but next time, try making statement type sentences. Please review my corrections carefully. Try to take notes of the corrections which you have noticed from them. Again, thank you and have a great day ahead! :)

- Teacher Raven 

1. What are you deficient stuff?
>> What are you deficient of?
2. Are you a rich of nutrients?
>> Is your body rich with nutrients?
3. I have to get a good health in far future
>> I need to have good health in the future.
4. What different your cultures compare to South Korea
>> What is the difference of your culture compared to South Korea?
5. What did you choose a optimal thing?
>> What optimal thing did you choose?
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